Hamasaki, Katomi [WIP]

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HAMASAKI, KATOMI.

THE INFO.

Name:Katomi Hamasaki
Nickname:Wolf girl
Age:17
Gender:Female
Appearance:
Hair: Katomi has long deep purplish blue hair that relates to her chakra in color. It is about 2 and a half feet long in length, reaching just beyond her midriff. She enjoys having it long as she loves the way it sways in the wind, becoming almost one with the earth.

Build: Katomi is a mildly chested girl and stands to be a petite 5 feet tall and weighs around 100lbs. Her frame is that of a small hourglass shape due to her size and petite-ness. She is decently muscular, showing enough to be toned, yet not overly muscular; in order to keep her feminine look. She acquired this body-type through her desire to constantly train.

Eyes: Her eyes are white, yet they have a slight tinge of purple also mimicking her chakra's color. She often is happy so the happiness shows through. Her eyes are generally more soft and warming while she is in this state, allowing other to feel comfortable around her. Yet, when she is saddened- though it is rare- they seem to cloud over and appear to be more purplish. This is generally the case until she is angered by someone then her normal warm, soft eyes can feel as cold and electric as lightning.

Expressions: Katomi is generally an open book when it comes to her expressiveness. She loves to smile and is quite animated. This makes up, however, for her stern and hard to read face in combat. Any time she is not in combat, she is easily read and bubbly. Once angered, however, her mouth will turn downward into a scowl, and her eyes will narrow slightly. If she is in a playful mood, she will wear a smirk and her eyes will mimic that of her combat expression; focused.

Clothing: Katomi often likes things that look more expensive than they really are. She generally wears a dark, sleeveless, partially backless shirt that is somewhat form fitting. She generally wears a white skirt with some sort of shorts in case she needs to remove the skirt for swiftness. She bears an armband on her left arm a few inches above her elbow. On her right arm, she bears the forehead band of the village of Kumogakure due to her problem of not being able to keep it securely on her head.

Tattoos and Scars: Katomi trains hard and because of that she will often end up with scratches and bruises. However, one scar surpasses the rest with its age. That is, she has a small but somewhat long scar on her right cheek. She barely remembers even getting it and unless pointed out to her, she doesn't remember it's there since she can't see it.

Forehead Protector:Right arm, a few inches above her elbow as an armband

Personality:
Observant: Katori is often perceived as being shy, though she opens up quickly to those around her. She just prefers to observe her surroundings first before engaging in them. She found this to be useful in learning things that were important for her to know such as an opponent's weakness or strength.

Caring: Katori grew up not being like everyone else in the village, her difference made her more caring rather than causing her to feel like an outcast. She will do most things for those she cares about most whether they are hurt, or in need of her aid.

Loneliness:Katomi never knew her family, as she was found as an orphan when she was very young. She had nearly collapsed and the last conscious moment she could see, she was alone. It wasn't until she closed her eyes she had heard foot steps, but by then she was too tired to reopen them. To this day, she fears closing her eyes and hearing no one come for her.

Strength: Katomi is pretty strong, as she grows older, her strength only grows. She used to cry a little when she was younger if she felt any sort of pain or sadness. Now, she is able to suppress it until she is alone in order to cry without anyone witnessing it. She also tries not to let her foes know when something is wrong.

Wolves: Katomi is obsessed with wolves, sometimes, she likes to draw red lines across her face to pretend she is some sort of wold, such as the mask types she had seen as a child. She sometimes likes to pretend she's a wolf in her dreams.

Clan:Hyuuga

Nindō:"Not everything is as it seems."

THE NINJA.

Origin:Her origin is unknown, but as far as she is aware, she has always been with the cloud village.
Affiliation:Kumogakure
Rank:C
Specialities:
Main:Ninjitsu
Sub:Taijustsu

Elemental Affinities:
Main:Doton/Earth
Sub: Raiton/Lightning

Combat Style:
Katomi is a fast thinker and quick on her feet. She prefers paying attention to her surroundings over fighting. She is an outside of the box thinker and often tries to find creative ways of fighting. She enjoys a fight unless it is for the wrong reason. Her first tactic would be to parry and evade from attacks while trying to figure out her opponent. She likes to hide her weaponry in her clothing and use it at the last possible second.

She is best at hand to hand combat though she has some spells for ranged. She is generally a pacifist and will try to stay out of combat if it is not necessary. Another weakness is her caring for others. If someone she cares about is hurt, she tends to be a little more reckless in an effort to be able to save them.

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THE BACKGROUND.

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THE ARSENAL.

Hyuuga Clan Jutsu

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Fighting Style

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Name: Jūken | Gentle Fist Style
Clan: Hyuuga
Emphasis: The Jūken emphasizes light high speed attacks that inflicts internal damage and disrupt the body's Chakra Pathway System to ultimately inhibit and an opponent's use of chakra as well as causing severe internal damage.
Requirements: Must have the Byakugan (Activated)
Description: The Gentle Fist (柔拳, Jūken) or Gentle Fist Style (柔拳法, Jūkenpō) is a form of hand-to-hand combat used by members of the Hyūga clan. It inflicts internal damage and disrupt the body's Chakra Pathway System so as to ultimately inhibit an opponent's use of chakra. To do this, the user surgically injects a small amount of their own chakra into an opponent's chakra pathway system. The infiltrating chakra can then be used to disrupt or divert chakra flow, preventing them from using jutsu. Targeting the Tenketsu can enhance the havoc and control a Jūken user can impose upon an opponent's chakra network. These special nodes, 361 in total, are key gate-keeping interceptions in the chakra circulatory network, thus forcibly opening or sealing them in whatever manner the Jūken-user sees fit is a powerful tactical option to have. Harming the chakra network in this way can directly damage internal organs due to their proximity to the chakra circulatory system. Even the slightest tap can cause severe internal damage, hence the name "gentle" fist.

Natural Jutsu:

Quote :: Name: Gentle Fist
Rank: E-S(C)
Type: Taijutsu
Description: This is the base fighting style the Hyuuga learns at an early age, which emphasis the abilities of their Byakugan which allows them to see chakra networks. This is an advanced fighting style which is difficult to learn and requires much practice and dedication to master. This technique allows the user to passively seal a persons Tenki points upon physical contact, thus slowly depleting their chakra in the process. 1CP will be depleted with each successful attack from the user, no matter how minimal it is. This lasts for the entire thread. Because the chakra network and human system are so aligned, while depleting a persons tenki points the user also causes severe internal pain upon the contacted area. This applies to all Hyuuga jutsu which strike the body through physical touch.

Jutsu

Name: Hiratehi-ru Dageki | Palm Heel Strike
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m) Striking Distance
Element: -
Description: Hiratehi-ru Dageki is a very base technique performed by the members of the Hyuuga Clan. This attack consists of a quick, precise thrust of the users' palm to an opponent's body. If the jutsu strikes at dead center, it may can thrust the enemy back a couple of meters.
Chakra Cost: 3CP

Name: Chakura Hari no Jutsu | Chakra Needle Technique
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu - Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: -
Description: Chakura Hari no Jutsu is a common technique performed by the members of he Hyuuga Clan. After focusing chakra outside the body, the chakra is formed into visible needles which can be propelled at the user's target. By using Byakugan, this technique can be used to hit very small targets, such as bees etc. This attack can also be used to attack a persons chakra network by performing accurate shots into their chakra system. It these needles exceed the range, they disappear. 4 needles make be made at one time using this jutsu.
Chakra Cost: 4CP

Name: Hakke Kūshō | Eight Trigrams Empty Palm
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: -
Description: Hakke Kūshō is a technique performed by members of the Hyuuga Clan. This technique is similar in practice to Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin, but has a specific target rather than a general area. To perform it, the user precisely pinpoints the enemy's vital points with the Byakugan and releases a high-speed palm thrust. A "vacuum shell" compressed using the Gentle Fist is formed to violently push the opponent away a few meters.
Chakra Cost: 7CP

Name: Hakkeshō Kaiten | Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin
Rank: C-A(C)
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 2m), B Rank (0m ~ 3m), A Rank (0m ~ 4m)
Element: -
Description: Hakkeshō Kaiten is a technique performed by members of the Hyuuga Clan. A Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline using the Jyuuken. Kaiten is a special technique passed down through the main family line. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the clan member an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the member to see all angles of attack. If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack. As the rank of this technique increases, its power is exponentially increased as well. At C Rank, the force from the attack is enough to knock back attackers and dispel shadow clones. At B Rank, a direct hit from the Kaiten may cause serious head injury or break bones. At A Rank, lethal damage may be deal via direct contact, and it can repel attacks several times larger than itself. Clan Prodigy may extend the range by .5m at C Rank and 1m at A Rank.
Chakra Cost: C - 8CP (2 per post), B - 14CP (3 per post), A - 22CP (5 per post)

Name: Hakke Sanjūni Shō | Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m) Striking Distance
Element: -
Description: Eight Trigrams Thrity-Two Palms is a technique performed by the members of the Hyuuga Clan. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body and close 32 tenketsu. First the clan member will strike once for 2 points, again for 4 points, three for 8 points, four for 16 points, and finally five for 32 points. This damage forcibly closes 32 tenketsu, slowing the chakra flow of the opponent which causes fatigue in battle and removes 32 chakra. Equal ranked ninja may find it difficult to avoid this attack in striking distance, though higher ranked ninja may interrupt it by evading if skillful enough.
Chakra Cost: 8CP

Name: Hakke Rokujūyon Shō | Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m) Striking Distance
Element: -
Description: Hakke Rokujūyon Shō is a technique performed by the members of the Hyuuga Clan. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body and close 64 tenketsu. First the clan member will strike once for 2 points, again for 4 points, three for 8 points, four for 16 points, five for 32 points and finally six for 64 points. This damage forcibly closes 64 tenketsu, slowing the chakra flow of the opponent which causes fatigue in battle and removes 64 chakra. Equal ranked ninja may find it difficult to avoid this attack in striking distance, though higher ranked ninja may interrupt it by evading if skillful enough.
Chakra Cost: 14CP

Name: Hakke Kūhekishō | Eight Trigrams Empty Wall Palm
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: -
Description: Hakke Kūhekishō is a technique performed by members of the Hyuuga Clan. A variant of the Empty Palm technique, the user thrusts both their palms and releases one large "vacuum shell" capable flattening an area with incredible force. Those struck will be sent back approximately ten meters.
Chakra Cost: 15CP

Name: Jūkenpō Ichigekishin | Gentle Fist Style One Blow Body
Rank: C - S(C)
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 2m)
Element: -
Description: Jūkenpō Ichigekishin is a technique performed by members of the Hyuuga Clan. Using their ability to expel chakra from every chakra point on their body, a member of the Hyuuga clan can hit their opponent with a explosion of chakra that will send them flying away from the user a few meters. This technique can break equal rank and below snares; even techniques such as Water Prison. As the technique scales to higher ranks, it is possible to free oneself from stronger holds. It also is quickly performed, especially at later ranks.
Chakra Cost: C - 6, B - 14, A - 20, S - 35

Name: Jūho Sōshiken | Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m) Striking Distance
Element: -
Description: Jūho Sōshiken is a very special technique performed by select members of the Hyuuga Clan. The user forms two large lion-shaped shrouds of chakra around their hands, then attacks the opponent with them. These lion fists increases their natural Gentle Fist ability while not only increasing their ability to close tenki points, but even cause mediocre physical damage. It is possible to hit 8 points with a single strike. If the user expels the all chakra into the target they will be knocked back approximately five meters. Doing this ends the jutsu.
Chakra Cost: 22CP (Additional 4CP Per Post)

Name: Shugohakke Rokujūyon Shō | Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 2m)
Element: -
Description: Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms is a special technique performed by the members of the Hyuuga Clan. This jutsu allows the user to emit a constant stream of chakra from their palms, creating extremely sharp chakra blades. With their natural flexibility, they can reach any point around themselves, allowing them to hit any target within their field of vision. While using this jutsu, the user moves extremely fast (their movements become a blur), allowing them to hit hundreds of targets with extreme precision, much like the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms. It is so precise that it can cut smaller targets (like bees) in half. The technique is powerful enough to knock back a a boulder. With the addition of the users flexibility, the technique creates an "absolute defense" effect similar to that of the Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin, though the cutting nature of the chakra prevents any outside force from restricting it. In this way, the technique can be used as both an offensive and defensive maneuver. Clan Prodigy may extend the range by .5m at C Rank and 1m at A Rank.
Chakra Cost: 25 (6 per post)

Name: Hakke Hyaku Nijūhachi Shō | Eight Trigrams One Hundred Twenty-Eight Palms
Rank: S
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m) Striking Distance
Element: -
Description: Hakke Hyaku Nijūhachi Shō is a technique performed by the members of the Hyuuga Clan. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body and close 128 tenketsu. First the clan member will strike once for 2 points, again for 4 points, three for 8 points, four for 16 points, five for 32 points, six for 64 points, and finally seven for 128 points. This damage forcibly closes 128 tenketsu, slowing the chakra flow of the opponent which causes extreme fatigue in battle and removes 128 chakra. Those who fall victim of this technique will be unable to utilize jutsu for 2 posts. Equal ranked ninja may find it difficult to avoid this attack though those with Elite Evasiveness may be skillful enough to avoid it. If partially avoided, the target will be still be affected by extreme fatigue and have 96 points closed.
Chakra Cost: 36CP

Academy:

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Taijutsu

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Doton Ninjitsu:

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Name: Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth.
Chakra Cost: 6 (2 per post)

Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.
Chakra Cost: 6

Name: Doton Bunshin no Jutsu - Earth Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Doton
Description: Doton Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes the earth to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Doton Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target, but none utilizing chakra. The range of the clone is limited however, it can travel no further than 10 meters from the original body. If the Doton Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into rock that crumbles to the ground.
Chakra Cost: 7 (Per clone)
Restrictions:

No weapons, armor, or equipment can be replicated to have above C-rank quality.
Replicated explosive notes, explosive kunai, explosive senbon, and exploding pouches are inert and cannot be set off.

Name: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu - Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.
Chakra Cost: 4

Name:ookami Doton or Wolf of Earth
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:Mid Range [5m-10m]
Element:Doton
Description: After making 3 hand signs, Katomi then focuses her chakra on creating 3 tiny wolf pups made of earth within 1m of her person. These pups are then directed by Katomi to launch themselves towards one or more targets. The pups push a target(s) they touch backwards a few feet as if she had delivered a series of kicks/punches.
Chakra Cost:7 CP

Name:Kari Doton or Hunting Earth
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:Mid Range [5m-10m]
Element:Doton
Description: After making 4 hand signs, Katomi then focuses her chakra on creating 1 tiny wolf pup made of earth within 1m of her person. This pup is then directed by Katomi to launch themselves towards her target, or can be controlled if used in more than one post. The pup impacts with the target, pushing it back several feet.Chakra Cost:7CP, 2CP/post after

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FACE CLAIM.

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Source:Naruto (Canon)
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Hello there,
Before I start fully sweeping your app, you might be interested in doing the following:

Katomi wrote:: Specialities:Ninjitsu, Taijustsu
Elemental Affinities:Doton/Earth and Raiton/Lightning

That is what you have now, though you could change it to this as it is what most of the site does:

Specialties:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities:
Main: Doton/Earth
Sub: Raiton/Lightning

As for the Special Characteristics,
When you rank up, RP more around the site and become stronger as a character, you will be getting a wide array of characteristics which may make your Character Profile a bit bulky. That is why I suggest putting them in spoilers. Most people on the site including myself do it like this.

Physical based:

Chakra based:

Mental based:

Skill based:

Social based:

The spoilers are given these names because these are the kinds of SC we have.

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Hiruzen wrote:

Thank you very much for the pointer! I'm happy that you pointed that out to me. It does look much nicer now ^^

Age : 32 Posts : 1178

You managed to add quite a bit to the Appearance and Personality sections, good job on that. That said, I would like it if you would try to put an equally large amount of effort into the Combat Style section of the application. It is rather small compared to the rest of the personality things you filled out.

Some pointers could be how her moods affect her fighting, how she fights when the Byakugan is active, how she fights when the Byakugan is not active, how she fights people who specialize in close, mid or long ranges, etc etc.

Also, do you think you could elaborate a bit more on her History? There is often quite a lot to tell about a person and what happened to them between their birth and their 17th birthday.

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I'll certainly do my best ^_^